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The Loss: Chapter 1 - The price of a battle

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In the northern reaches of the world, where a group of warriors had stood their ground to stop the one who would have destroied a nation just because he found it flawed. However a group of young warriors fought against him to prevent the genocide of their nation.

After having fought against this evil, when they thought that they had achived victory without out anyone dying, he stood up yet again and attacked the group of warriors this time he was acting diffrently as his desire for destruction had taken over his body and was moving the body.
The group was losing fighters fast so the leader a young coyote who had delivered the previous death strike on his enemy called forth his blade of lightning and fought to the level which his body could still achive, sadly it was not enough the young coyote recived a deep slash over his left eye permanently destroying the young coyote's eye sight. Faced with a opponent that would kill everyone the young coyote was forced to make a choice of using a techninque that would litterally destroy one arm of his but in return it would grant them victory.

As the sky darkend and the rain started to fall, the young coyote activated the techninque and striked his enemy destroying what was moving his opponent however as a side effect the young coyote's arm that was used for the techninque couldn't be moved at all and looked like it had been burnt to the level of a charcoal, he could only feel a pain that would have driven a normal person to the point of suicide.
As the sky cleared the young coyote looked over who was still left alive before using the lightning blade to cut off the destroyed arm before the medics arrive and started to treat the wounds of those few that were still left alive and preparing the bodies of those who had died to be shipped to their families for a proper funeral.

A few months have passed since they arrived back home, the young coyote had been restored to the point the hospital could but the young coyote is still impaired with one eye that had been destroyed and losing a arm. He told his father that he was going on a journey to find out more about himself and make a name for himself that his father would be proud of.
Just a bit of story of alternate Tobias where a key event was won but at a great cost. I will throw up pages every now and again just don't expect too many chapters there will possibly be around 5 - 10
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